When barackobama.com relaunched this spring, I signed up to their newsletter, curious to see how the campaign would use email to rebuild enthusiasm and action in its softening base.
Though I rarely have time to read the emails, I always read the subject lines:
Barack Obama is in your Inbox
They never mention the candidate. Since the ‘08 campaign, messaging has always been about us, our community, the change we want. Nothing new here, but impressively consistent.
Actually, they rarely include any proper nouns. Instead of people, places, bills or taxes, they speak of opportunity, urgency, belonging and progress.
They are written to be forwarded. Though an email from a campaign manager titled “Something lovely” comes off a little cloying, once I forward it to my sister, there’s a decent chance it’ll blend right into the conversational tone she’s used to from me.
I would love to peek in on the writing process for these subject lines, and
see the stats on how these are performing. Leaving my personal aesthetic objections aside, I doubt there are many CRM campaigns anywhere operating on a higher level than this.
July 21, 2011
